morganlogan: (hurtwubbie)
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Title: The Price
Pairings: Starsky/Hutch, Hutch/OMC
Zine: Originally published in Venice Place Chronicles VI (2006) by Venice Place Press
Words: 26,024
Rating: NC-17
Categories: First Time
Betas: CC, [ profile] cousinshelley, edited by KeriT
Summary: Starsky's rage after Terry's death leads him to say something he regrets, and Hutch makes a decision that could cost them both.
A/N: an early novella? story of mine, inspired by a photoshop image I was working on from Pariah, which I've since used for my LJ banner. So, as you can see, 26K wds later I still wasn't done with it. :)

on my website: The Price (also in PDF format).

Date: 2011-01-21 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]

But I'm gonna read it again. :)

*pokes you*

Date: 2011-01-21 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
it's you! (perfect icon). hey, cuz. how've you been?

Date: 2011-01-22 01:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh my goodness...what a treat! I can't wait to read. Yay yay yay yay...



Date: 2011-01-22 01:37 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-01-23 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I've been savingthis to read for the weekend, and finally got to it today - and what a marvellous way to end my Sunday.

This was lovely, a slow journey, realisations and losses and written so beautifully.

I liked the introduction of Rik, a good OC, believable and whole. Starsky's thoughts when seeing them together, his initial failure to understand what that means for him.

The sacrifice they're both prepared to make for each other; both accepting Rik, again, without realising fully what that means for them each.

And, of course, the wonderful coming together, the beauty of their words for each other and the, erm, heat, of their actions!

I loved it.

Date: 2011-02-06 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
thank you, lola! what a lovely note.

(I'm glad you enjoyed Rik. I was awfully fond of him myself. I remember CC demanded a threesome story after she finished beta'ing. :)))

Date: 2011-01-26 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you so much for posting and providing the opportunity to read this story!

At first, I was resisting, just a bit, because of my own (and only my own) objection to the guys being with anyone else except each other. That said, Rik grew on me so quickly. What a great character - a smart and compassionate man, worthy of another strong man like Hutch. I thought the interweaving of characterization, action, and dialogue were wonderful and on target. And then the "ah ha!" moment. Actually, sometimes these boys really need a slap upside their adorable heads. But emotions and realizations in real life aren't straightforward - they can be warped around and tangled, which you captured so well. A great story, one to reread. Really loved it, Morgan, truly! I've said this before, in other feedback, but in particular, I love the way you write Hutch. You have him "down" and he stays in character from first appearance to last. Your writing is fluid, seems effortless, and is always strong. Thank you so much for sharing this!

PS - Now. What else you got? :-)


Date: 2011-02-06 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
real life can be a bitch sometimes, yeah. :) so very glad you enjoyed it so much.

ps: oh! you're bad. :)))

Date: 2011-01-27 08:19 am (UTC)
hardboiledbaby: (S&H two halves)
From: [personal profile] hardboiledbaby

Oh, this was awesome. I love, love the boys in your hands, you give them strength and nobility even in the face of their fears and failings. I enjoyed seeing them through Rik's eyes as well. Moments of revelation and realization, perfectly written. Damn, no one writes a FT story like you. Thank you so much for sharing.

*flails summore*

Date: 2011-02-06 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
thanks, my sweet!


Date: 2011-02-02 03:08 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Awesome story!

Re: Thanks

Date: 2011-02-06 11:43 am (UTC)
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