MS: The Thin Brown Line (gen)

[morganlogan]

hey kids. this one is a missing series of
scenes from the Plague. poor wubbie.


URL: http://morganlogan.com/brown.html

Title: The Thin Brown Line
Author: Morgan Logan
Genre: gen
Warning: it really is gen
Feedback: if you please
Critique: shua
Disclaimer: I shot the sheriff
Category: missing scene
Complete (~2700 wds)

Comments

[dragonmuse.livejournal.com]

Lovely. :) I particularly like the play on words with the title, and then the way Dobey's thoughts focus on such a small detail at first -- I do that in times of turmoil, so, for me especially, it really captures Dobey's state of mind and lets me get inside his head. Loved seeing the boys through Dobey's eyes as well -- it really is a unique and honest view, and I really enjoyed it, as tense as things were at times.