NS: Transparent Blue (gen)

[morganlogan]

URL: http://morganlogan.com/transparent.html

Title: Transparent Blue
Author: Morgan Logan
Genre: gen
Comments: if you feel up to it
Critique: shua
Disclaimer: It only breathes when I hurt
Complete (~2,100 wds)
Notes: Beta'd by CC. Warning: SECOND PERSON POV. be afeared.

Comments

[enednoviel.livejournal.com]

Interesting approach, molo! I enjoyed it! :)

[morganlogan.livejournal.com]

tankru!

[sketchytlr.livejournal.com]

I've read several of your stories over the years, but never this one, which I really like; especially the pov. I go for the shorter stories usually, and you really do them well. I'm glad I found this one.

[morganlogan.livejournal.com]

thanks! I have to say that was an experiment I feel really worked.